Posted December 21, 2020. 06:32
Posted December 21, 2020. 07:12
Serena
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Instead of the line, how about moving the orbs under the text? Because having the text and the orbs in a single corner is real distracting and makes the composition quite off, imo. Maybe even clean up the textures over the face to make the highlights less dull to create a bit more depth and attention to both the text and the character’s face.
Posted December 21, 2020. 08:38
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I mostly agree with Mav. I like the stock you picked and the crop a lot. The style with text and orbs goes really well with this kind of stocks where you have like, a special place for the text that won't affect the stock at all. In my opinion what could you improve is the choice of the textures. Looks dope Mito!
Posted December 22, 2020. 05:18
Posted December 22, 2020. 05:52