Topic: Where can i improve?

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#1
[align=left]I opened ps after almost a year and made this. What can i improve?[/align]
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#2
Instead of the line, how about moving the orbs under the text? Because having the text and the orbs in a single corner is real distracting and makes the composition quite off, imo. Maybe even clean up the textures over the face to make the highlights less dull to create a bit more depth and attention to both the text and the character’s face.
#3
I mostly agree with Mav. I like the stock you picked and the crop a lot. The style with text and orbs goes really well with this kind of stocks where you have like, a special place for the text that won't affect the stock at all. In my opinion what could you improve is the choice of the textures. Looks dope Mito!
#4
Thanks for the suggestions, this is what i ended up with. 

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#5
(December 22, 2020. 05:18)AnteMito
Thanks for the suggestions, this is what i ended up with. 

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Such a drastic difference. I love it!



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