EDIT: I fucked up and didn't add the 5 bonus damage part to Twin Lion Fists. It's there now, sorry!
EDIT 2: Removed the last sentence from the 3rd skill because it made no sense. Made changes to this in general. Re-read it (jesus I am fucking up right now. this should be the last change I make, so sorry!)
EDIT 3 (12/17): Re-balanced the first skill. I really believe she's perfect now.
The list of changes:
Pressure-Point Closure
- No longer removes Hinata Eight-Trigrams Field from the target if it is active
- No longer increases the duration of the chakra cost increase
- Increases the cost of the target's skills by 1 additional random chakra for every stack of Hinata Eight-Trigrams Field on the target
- Deals 15 damage, up 5 from 10. Deals 10 bonus during Hinata Eight-Trigrams Field
- This skill now costs 1 taijutsu, instead of 1 random
Twin Lion Fists
- Now deals piercing damage
- No longer removes Pressure-Point Closure from the target
- Will now remove all stacks of Hinata Eight-Trigrams Field from the target
- For every stack removed, this skill deals 5 bonus damage & the target is marked for 1 turn (per stack). If Pressure-Point Closure is used on a character marked by this skill, they lose 1 random chakra.
Hinata Eight-Trigrams Field
- May now be used while active. If used, it will apply a new stack of this effect to any target who currently has no stacks of Hinata Eight-Trigrams Field
- Now has a cooldown of 1, down 3 from 4
Reasoning for this rework:
I think Devil came very close to making this design basically perfect but sort of missed the mark when it comes to the skill interactions. This rework makes an attempt to fix where he could have made it come full circle, so things will work much more fluidly and not sorta screw Hinata over by removing irreplaceable stacks with both her damage skills. This also makes things less confusing. There is one skill that can remove stacks. There is only one type of stack that can be removed. The current version has 1 skill removing 1 type of stack and another removing a different type of stack, and that is not only confusing, but also weird and completely counterproductive to what it is trying to do. It attempts to create flow but it simultaneously removes your ability to connect the skills together, thus clogging the drain. Well, my rework connects allows them to flow together seamlessly. I completely understand what Devil was trying to do with this Hinata though. Hopefully I did it justice. Sorry if I didn't dude
EDIT 2: Removed the last sentence from the 3rd skill because it made no sense. Made changes to this in general. Re-read it (jesus I am fucking up right now. this should be the last change I make, so sorry!)
EDIT 3 (12/17): Re-balanced the first skill. I really believe she's perfect now.
The list of changes:
Pressure-Point Closure
- No longer removes Hinata Eight-Trigrams Field from the target if it is active
- No longer increases the duration of the chakra cost increase
- Increases the cost of the target's skills by 1 additional random chakra for every stack of Hinata Eight-Trigrams Field on the target
- Deals 15 damage, up 5 from 10. Deals 10 bonus during Hinata Eight-Trigrams Field
- This skill now costs 1 taijutsu, instead of 1 random
Twin Lion Fists
- Now deals piercing damage
- No longer removes Pressure-Point Closure from the target
- Will now remove all stacks of Hinata Eight-Trigrams Field from the target
- For every stack removed, this skill deals 5 bonus damage & the target is marked for 1 turn (per stack). If Pressure-Point Closure is used on a character marked by this skill, they lose 1 random chakra.
Hinata Eight-Trigrams Field
- May now be used while active. If used, it will apply a new stack of this effect to any target who currently has no stacks of Hinata Eight-Trigrams Field
- Now has a cooldown of 1, down 3 from 4
Reasoning for this rework:
I think Devil came very close to making this design basically perfect but sort of missed the mark when it comes to the skill interactions. This rework makes an attempt to fix where he could have made it come full circle, so things will work much more fluidly and not sorta screw Hinata over by removing irreplaceable stacks with both her damage skills. This also makes things less confusing. There is one skill that can remove stacks. There is only one type of stack that can be removed. The current version has 1 skill removing 1 type of stack and another removing a different type of stack, and that is not only confusing, but also weird and completely counterproductive to what it is trying to do. It attempts to create flow but it simultaneously removes your ability to connect the skills together, thus clogging the drain. Well, my rework connects allows them to flow together seamlessly. I completely understand what Devil was trying to do with this Hinata though. Hopefully I did it justice. Sorry if I didn't dude